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Monday, 14 November 2016

Book Buddies Term 4

In Term 4 me and My book buddy Maria read the Giraffe and The Pelly and Me and are currently reading the 13 storey treehouse. What we are trying to get better at is predicting. We're getting better at this by thinking what is most likely to happen next.

Thursday, 10 November 2016

Prep

We did prep so Me, Maya and Juven made Pom poms with faces! Me and Maya call them Little critters but Juven calls them Pom Pom critters. At first we were going to do Pom Pom birds in little Bird houses but then we changed to making Pom Pom critters. We sold out kind of fast but not too fast. Overall in prep I think me and my group did pretty good.

Our Prep slide:

Tuesday, 8 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

Description: Over the last couple of weeks we have been working on a persuasive add to sell a useless box! We came up with the idea Holo Box what I mean by we is Me and Devin! So we wrote an ad about it and this is how it went!

Add for Holo Box:
D:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
D:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
D:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS
Both:BYEEEEEEE!

Feedback:I think you did well on your script because it's short but persuasive.
Feedforward:I think next time you could work on trying to have a little bit of humour in your script

Evaluation:I think me and Devin did a great job of our script but maybe next time we could make it more dramatic