Description: My friends and I chose this piece of writing because it was entertaining for all of us and I think who ever reads this would love it and want more of it! Hope you enjoy!
We just arrived at camp and our cabin is fab. "EMMA," said Abby.
"Coming Abby." See ya later diary this is gonna be an experience I'll never forget. "This will be an experience she'll never forget but not in a good way the ca-there coming good luck cabin 2 your gonna need it," said the cabin trasher. "OMG my legs hurt so much after discover EL Rancho HONK HONK," said Emma.
So I know this is short but bye-diary. "I'm so nervous for horse riding I've never done it before Naomi," said Emma "Emma it's fine the horse won't hurt you," said Naomi. "AAAAHH I'm up now hey this horse looks friendly," said Emma. “That's mini,” said the horse instructor. While everyone in cabin 2 were out the cabin thrasher or you might know him as ca was summoning a plan "I have now made my plan muahahaha," said the cabin trasher. "Wow Naomi that wasn't so scary after all it was really fun ," said Emma. HONK HONK.
"Well we better get back now bye mini," said Emma. “Naaah," said mini. "We are now ready for bed I didn't have time to write so good night everyone," said Emma.“goodnight," said everyone in cabin 2. good night diary.
"What the even happened here we were only gone for-," said Emma "Spoiler alert Emma," said Abby ."But fine I'll start from earlier then ok diary and readers it all started maybe 15 to 20 minutes ago.
"We were all in the quiet room for camp Hui but after that we went back to our cabins and the one I'm in is perfectly tidy but oviously I'm last there as always but when I got there."Emma hurry up and get to the good part," said Abby. "Abby that's what I'm doing anyways back to the story where was I oh yes but when I got there everyone in my cabin was blocking the door. “Um guys we need to tidy up our cabin and get ready for the bom Fire smor-what happened here! OMG," said Emma
“There's Maya's tooth paste on the floor. What has happened here?!?,” said Emma. “There's missing things clothes in Caitlin's suitecase that belongs,to maya well I don't know what's going on here but someone's been in while we've been out," said Emma. “Ok so we're ready to go to sleep nighttt everybody," said Emma. “night said everyone . “Good morning everyone” “uuuhhhhhhhhh guys why does it say kyla and Kayla?! Said Emma.” Everyone stared at where it said Kyla and Kayla who did it could it be Kayla?.
"Activities activities and you guessed it activities then dinner hour later like bed but…
Before we go to bed we ssoree another message what I like to call msg but it's rubbed out spoookaaaeeee!!! Said Emma". “EMMA!” “What?”said Emma. “You really have to write now” “sorry” night guys.” Said Emma. As soon as I fall asleep I hear HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU"." (whispers) thank you." Said Emma.
Reane Abby go to bed now! Said maya “Fine” “okydoky” night everyone.
Morning diary we need to tidy fast “EMMA HELP NOW”said everyone apart from me and Abby. But Abby's doing it two “ABBY EMMA TIDY NOW! Said everyone apart from me and Abby. "Meep ok anyway it's almost time to go". Said Emma. “EMMA ABBY START NOW” said everyone apart from me and Abby.
“BOOOOOOOOOOOO” said the cabin trasher. "aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh?!??!?!" Said everyone in cabin 2.
The End or is it.
A real story written by Emma Ormsby.
Feedback/Feedforward: WOW Emma! That's one spookie story! I liked it so much I thought you could write a series and make half of it fake! Really you should do that! From Abby Y
Evaluation: Thanks for the Feedfoward I'll do that next time. I wonder if my story was too scary? Maybe next time I could make my story's creapyer or less creepy.