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Tuesday, 8 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

Description: Over the last couple of weeks we have been working on a persuasive add to sell a useless box! We came up with the idea Holo Box what I mean by we is Me and Devin! So we wrote an ad about it and this is how it went!

Add for Holo Box:
D:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
D:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
D:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS
Both:BYEEEEEEE!

Feedback:I think you did well on your script because it's short but persuasive.
Feedforward:I think next time you could work on trying to have a little bit of humour in your script

Evaluation:I think me and Devin did a great job of our script but maybe next time we could make it more dramatic

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