My slide is good. I think I could have done better with my sentences but its ok
FeedBack/FeedFoward: I really like your simple, compound and complex sentences there really good! Maybe next time you could make you're complex sentences longer. -Devin
Evaluation: Thanks for the tip! I agree with you. They weren't the longest that they could have been. But other than the shortness of my sentences I think they were good!