Purpose: To describe an interesting character so we can tell a story about them at the Marae stay.
WALT: Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.
Introduce your character in an entertaining way.
Describe their looks.
Describe their personality.
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary)
Criteria: I can
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
- use a range of verbs
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
- select one or two similes
- use onomatopoeia to show sounds
- select words that start with the same sound (alliteration)
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words)
Feedback and Feedford
Feedback I love the way you called the cloud sweet street.
Feedford You could add more detail.
Once there was a girl but not just a girl she is mrs pancake dude
She lived on a cloud called sweet street and in the middle there was a castle.
Isant it lovely and paceful here in sweet street. The white flufy clouds it is so paceful
No wait a cloud is starting to drop I push it back up the end.