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Monday, 14 November 2016

Book Buddies Term 4

In Term 4 me and My book buddy Maria read the Giraffe and The Pelly and Me and are currently reading the 13 storey treehouse. What we are trying to get better at is predicting. We're getting better at this by thinking what is most likely to happen next.

Thursday, 10 November 2016

Prep

We did prep so Me, Maya and Juven made Pom poms with faces! Me and Maya call them Little critters but Juven calls them Pom Pom critters. At first we were going to do Pom Pom birds in little Bird houses but then we changed to making Pom Pom critters. We sold out kind of fast but not too fast. Overall in prep I think me and my group did pretty good.

Our Prep slide:

Tuesday, 8 November 2016

Persuasive Writing

Description: Over the last couple of weeks we have been working on a persuasive add to sell a useless box! We came up with the idea Holo Box what I mean by we is Me and Devin! So we wrote an ad about it and this is how it went!

Add for Holo Box:
D:COME ONE COME ALL TO RUSSELL STREET SCHOOL!!!
E:FOR THE FIRST EVER HOLOBOX!!
D:BY THE PRESS OF A BUTTON, U WILL BE SURROUNDED BY A TUBE LIKE HOLOGRAM! ITS THE TECH OF THE FUTURE! USE IT AS A PHONE OR IPAD!
E:YOU CAN SPY ON PEOPLE PLAY REAL LIFE MINCRAFT AND SO MUCH MORE!
D:WITH AN ORANGE LID AND GREEN BOTTOM ITS THE BEST COLOUR COMBINATION OUT THERE! BUY NOW OR ALL WILL SELL OUT, FOR ONLY $300 DOLLARS! ONLY 300!
E:SEE YOU AT RSS
Both:BYEEEEEEE!

Feedback:I think you did well on your script because it's short but persuasive.
Feedforward:I think next time you could work on trying to have a little bit of humour in your script

Evaluation:I think me and Devin did a great job of our script but maybe next time we could make it more dramatic

Thursday, 22 September 2016

Risk taking

Description: Today Abby one of my friends was a Coach for Caitlin Phoebe and Me For risk taking. My Least biggest risk is working with someone who isn't my friend and my Most biggest risk is dancing with a different gender (Boy) and we have to do it next term.
What My action plan looks like:



Thursday, 15 September 2016

Calendar Art

Description:
Over the term we have been working on this art for our Calendar with Suzanne. We used Eric Carl as our inspiration, for this art we texturised some pieces of paper with paint. I have used almost all of my pieces of paper. This is my finished product.
 

FeedBack/FeedFoward: I think that you're art looks amazing! maybe next time you could try to fill in the gaps to make it look even more stunning!-Devin 

Evaluation: Thank you Devin I will do that next time. What I think was easiest was making the pattern. What I found hard was making sure all of the circle

Monday, 5 September 2016

ET Reo

Description: For term three of ET Reo we were working on Whakatauki's. Our first Whakatauki is

He aha te mea nui o te ao?

He tangata! He tangata! He tangata!


What is the most important thing in the world?

It is people! It is people! It is people!

Here is what our drawings of people look like

Here is what my drawing looks like

Feedback/FeedFoward: I love your drawing and how you got it finished in time. Do you think there is anything you could add to make if better? Maybe some details?
-Abigail

Evaluation: I think that I did good but I think maybe if I had more time there would be less miskito bites (White bits)


Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing reflection

Description: I think I did good on my writing but I think it took me forever to do. What I found easiest was the simple sentences. The hardest 1 was Complex sentences for me.

 
My slide is good. I think I could have done better with my sentences but its ok

FeedBack/FeedFoward: I really like your simple, compound and complex sentences there really good! Maybe next time you could make you're complex sentences longer. -Devin 

Evaluation: Thanks for the tip! I agree with you. They weren't the longest that they could have been. But other than the shortness of my sentences I think they were good!